Rose Makh
Writing Coach &
Developmental Editor

I’m your fiction “handyman!”

As an author myself, I know the joys and pains of pouring your soul into a story. As a developmental editor and writing coach, I strive to help you build the best possible version of your story. Let’s work together to build your amazing dream!

Latest Posts


  • Character: The Galactic Dictator

    [Note: This is in response to a question someone posted on Reddit. You can see the original post here. (opens in a new tab)] I think ruling the galaxy to save the galaxy is solid motivation. There would be a… Continue reading

    Character: The Galactic Dictator
  • Character: The Arrogant Swordswoman

    [Note: This is an analysis of a rough draft of a scene someone posted on Reddit. You can see the original post here. (opens in a new tab)] This is a good opportunity to craft a female character into the… Continue reading

    Character: The Arrogant Swordswoman
  • Worldbuilding: “In Her Eyes”

    Genre: Realistic Drama [For character notes for this story, see the character notes file] ——POINT OF VIEW OF THE STORY3rd personScenes only exist where the main character female is.Omnipresent scene descriptions, events, and character actions.The reader experiences the story as… Continue reading

    Worldbuilding: “In Her Eyes”
  • Premise: Thrift Store Android

    Genre: Science Fiction He found her in a pile of scrap parts at a second-hand store. She was an old model, not one of the newer anatomically correct ones, but her face was pretty. She was a do-it-yourself model, the… Continue reading

    Premise: Thrift Store Android
  • Premise: Pickled People Parts

    Genre: Realistic, Horror, Thriller [Content Warning: Cannibalism and other extremely nauseating imagery] [Note: This is meant to be a psychological thriller with horror elements and gross-out imagery. The characters are put in a life-or-death situation. A moral choice is before… Continue reading

    Premise: Pickled People Parts
  • Premise: The Charitable Skeleton

    Genre: Fantasy, Supernatural The gleaming human skeleton stood at the top of the grandiose staircase. It posed as if for a photo op, its polished leather dancing shoes gleaming beneath white, oversized socks. It had no muscles, skin, eyes, or… Continue reading

    Premise: The Charitable Skeleton
  • Magic System: Magic Tree with Magic-giving Seeds

    Genre: Fantasy This magic system was originally written with the idea that a god would set things up this way just to mess with humans. The limited availability of such a powerful resource would naturally lead to political and military… Continue reading

    Magic System: Magic Tree with Magic-giving Seeds
  • Magic System: Tears

    Genre: Fantasy GENERAL INFORMATION AND HISTORY In the world the story takes place in, the most intelligent beings are humans and other humanoids. There are also intelligent beasts that can use and/or understand language but may or may not be… Continue reading

    Magic System: Tears
  • Magic System: Reptile Spine Sails

    Genre: Fantasy GENERAL INFORMATION AND HISTORY On this planet, there was one suborder of reptile-like animals in which the males possessed a large spine sail made of fused bone. The beautiful sail was necessary for the species’ courting rituals. The… Continue reading

    Magic System: Reptile Spine Sails
  • Magic System: Hair

    Genre: Fantasy GENERAL INFORMATION AND HISTORY This simple magic system exists on an alternative version of our Earth. This version has the same continents we have now, but it’s much warmer. Most of the planet is covered in lush jungles.… Continue reading

    Magic System: Hair